I found the rest of the book to be very scattered. At that length, there would also have been no need for the emotional development that we didn't get anyway. This could have been a nice, super sexy, 70-or-so-page novella. It starts out as PWP and I actually think I would have preferred this be very short, and end at around 30%, once they've mated and Jonah finds out he's pregnant. There's not even an inkling of angst, it was pure unadulterated fluff.
Got off to a great start but lost me with the actual plot. This story has been expanded from its original version into a full-length novel. Jonah and the Narwhal is the first story in the Land and Sea shifter MPREG series featuring fated mates, pleasurable partial shifts, and the beginnings of a found family. Fate has intervened, and Edwin has no intention of ever letting Jonah go again. When Edwin comes home to find the omega-who he’s started to think of as his own-in heat, he realizes there is more at play than he first thought. Edwin Pictou couldn’t say why he hired the young omega lynx to clean his house, but Jonah had ensnared him at first sight, and now, even though he really doesn’t need a housekeeper, the thought of letting Jonah go is unsettling.
Pictou keeps Jonah returning to the big house on the cliff, a bone-deep longing he can’t explain-and recently, it’s been making Jonah crave the good doctor in ways he shouldn’t.ĭr. He definitely didn’t think he’d still be working for the mysterious older alpha two years later. When Jonah Steele hung a flyer in the local coffee shop advertising his services as a housekeeper, he didn’t expect the town’s hot doctor to hire him on the spot.
What happens when fate intertwines shifters from land and sea?
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